Question

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[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．用約30個單詞概述上述圖表內(nèi)容；
2．用約120詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）舉例分析目前高中生睡眠缺失的原因．
（2）就如何保證充足睡眠提出具體建議．
[寫作要求]
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
Various factors to blame，people of different occupations in contemporary society are more or less suffering sleep disorders，as a consequence of which their average work-day sleeping hours get shortened．（高分句型一）（30 words）
Shockingly，due to constant stress and tremendous amounts of homework，high school kids are among the sufferers．Take me as an example：Not only do I have to rise early，but I also need to face frequent tests and exercises once out of bed．（高分句型二）Therefore，burning midnight oil can never be too common for me．How can I ensure myself enough sleep？
To solve the problem，effective measures are to be worked out．Personally，having a better management of time is far more necessary．Make first things always first．That way，your work and play can be well balanced．Furthermore，a proper diet will surely count．Only with high efficiency and right food can you guarantee a satisfactory daily sleep．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Shockingly令人震驚的是；due to由于；Not only，but  also不僅，而且；Therefore因此；Personally就個人而言；Furthermore而且；
Various factors to blame，people of different occupations in contemporary society are more or less suffering sleep disorders，as a consequence of which their average work-day sleeping hours get shortened．（高分句型一）
Take me as an example：Not only do I have to rise early，but I also need to face frequent tests and exercises once out of bed．（高分句型二）
Only with high efficiency and right food can you guarantee a satisfactory daily sleep．（高分句型三）

解答 Various factors to blame，people of different occupations in contemporary society are more or less suffering sleep disorders，as a consequence of which their average work-day sleeping hours get shortened．（高分句型一）（30 words）
      Shockingly，due to constant stress and tremendous amounts of homework，high school kids are among the sufferers．Take me as an example：Not only do I have to rise early，but I also need to face frequent tests and exercises once out of bed．（高分句型二）Therefore，burning midnight oil can never be too common for me．How can I ensure myself enough sleep？
      To solve the problem，effective measures are to be worked out．Personally，having a better management of time is far more necessary．Make first things always first．That way，your work and play can be well balanced．Furthermore，a proper diet will surely count．Only with high efficiency and right food can you guarantee a satisfactory daily sleep．（高分句型三）（120 words）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．