Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“快樂(lè)送萬(wàn) 家”為主題的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記, 記述整個(gè)過(guò)程。

注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, our school organized an activity named “Happiness to Family”, which turned out to be meaningful and unforgettable.

On Monday morning, I signed up with my classmates as soon as we heard the news. We were very interested in it and had a heated discussion immediately. At last, we decided to sing a song named My Motherland. The next day, we began to make preparations for our performance. Everyone was very serious and hardworking to practice it. Then came the big day. It was time to show our performance. Our efforts paid off, because the audience in the community liked it, giving us a big applause. All of us were very happy and felt proud of ourselves. In the end, we got a prize and we were really excited when we got the souvenirs presented by the community staff there. There was a happy smile on everyone’s face.

Through this activity, I know bringing happiness to others can also make us happy. I hope our school can organize more activities like this.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“快樂(lè)送萬(wàn)家”為主題的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記, 記述整個(gè)過(guò)程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：turn out (結(jié)果是)；meaningful and unforgettable(有意義和難忘的)；sign up (報(bào)名)；as soon as (一……就……)；heated discussion (激烈討論)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。