Question

【題目】

（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 用約120個(gè)單詞對(duì)文中所述話題進(jìn)行討論, 內(nèi)容包括：

（1）外賣快遞人員導(dǎo)致事故的原因；

（2）如何解決這一問(wèn)題你有什么看法。

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1. 作文中可以利用了解到的經(jīng)歷, 也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

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Answer 1

【答案】As we can see from the materials, China’s food-delivery business is booming, with the value of meals rising sharply. However, traffic accidents also arise, threatening the safety of road users including deliverymen themselves.

What makes deliverymen take risks? Several reasons account for the phenomenon. For one thing, fearing being fined for being late or getting bad reviews, deliverymen choose to jump traffic lights instead of obeying traffic rules. For another, with great pressure of raising their family, deliverymen have to work themselves to the bone for more money, even when exhausted, putting their lives at risk.

To solve the problems, I firmly believe that proper measures should be taken. On one hand, the government should make regulations to prevent them from violating traffic rules. On the other hand, food delivery service companies should educate them and make sure their workers are not overloaded. If so, all can enjoy the benefits of food delivery services.

【解析】試題本文是一篇任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作。共分兩個(gè)任務(wù)：用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；第二個(gè)任務(wù)用約120個(gè)單詞對(duì)文中所述話題進(jìn)行討論, 內(nèi)容包括：（1）外賣快遞人員導(dǎo)致事故的原因；（2）如何解決這一問(wèn)題你有什么看法。第二部分給出了寫(xiě)作提綱。注意完成第一任務(wù)時(shí)，語(yǔ)言使用應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)練、準(zhǔn)確、到位。在第二個(gè)任務(wù)中，應(yīng)涵蓋題目所列出的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)。本文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作。文章內(nèi)容覆蓋了柱狀圖信息所體現(xiàn)的所有信息，并給出自己的看法。段落清晰，語(yǔ)句精煉，文中使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。As we can see from the materials, China’s food-delivery business is booming, with the value of meals rising sharply.句中as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；traffic accidents also arise, threatening the safety of road users including deliverymen themselves.現(xiàn)在分詞做自然的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)；fearing being fined for being late or getting bad reviews, deliverymen choose to jump traffic lights instead of obeying traffic rules.現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語(yǔ)；To solve the problems, I firmly believe that proper measures should be taken.動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)；另外，However, For one thing, For another, On one hand, On the other hand, If so,等的運(yùn)用使文章層次分明，上下文過(guò)渡流暢。