Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Selena來信告知她全家到湖南旅行的消息，并希望你 能推薦熟悉的旅游路線,如“長沙之行”“鳳凰之行”等。請你給她回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你推薦的路線；

2.你推薦的理由；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Selena,

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Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Selena

I am more than delighted to know that your family and you are about to visit Hunan. Since I was born and raised in the capital city, Changsha, it’s my pleasure to suggest a wonderful trip to you here.

To begin with, the Tianxin Tower is a place that you can’t miss, as it stands in the south of the old city, going through the hard experience and witnessing the big changes of Changsha. Moreover, for a foodie, there is no better place than Pozi Street, where you can enjoy some delicious food like spicy crayfish. Besides, if you want to buy some souvenirs, you may pay a visit to the shopping malls, which are centered around the Wuyi square.

Hope you’ll enjoy your stay here and keep in touch.

Your sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于書信應(yīng)用文。要求考生推薦熟悉的旅游路線給外國朋友。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)歡迎

2.提出相關(guān)建議

1）游玩地點(diǎn)。（the Tianxin Tower）

2）吃喝地點(diǎn)。（Pozi Street）

3) 購物地點(diǎn)。（the Wuyi square）

3. 寒暄結(jié)束。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Be more than; be about to do; it’s +n. +to do; go through; witness; pay a visit; be centered around; keep in touch…

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am more than delighted to know that your family and you are about to visit Hunan.

2. it’s my pleasure to suggest you a wonderful trip here.

3. As it stands in the south of the old city, going through the hard experience and witnessing the big changes of Changsha

4.You may pay a visit to the shopping malls, which are centered around the Wuyi square

5 Hope you ll enjoy your stay here and keep in touch.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：To begin with; First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改