Question

20．隨著人們的生活水平越來越高，有不少人忽視了體育鍛煉．你班學生就這一話題組織了一次班級討論，請對以下列舉的體育鍛煉的好處進行補充，并說說自己所喜愛的運動項目．

體育鍛煉的好處	1．對身體有好處； 2．能夠緩解壓力； … （至少補充兩個要點）
你喜歡的運動項目	（請加以說明）

【寫作要求】
1．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；
2．不必寫標題；
3．詞數(shù)150左右．
【評分標準】
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當．
Physical exercise is a necessary part of our life．However，still some people do not like to attend sports activities．They think those activities waste their time and influence their study．
Indeed，it is very unwise for people to keel distance from physical exercise．Physical exercise is very beneficial to us．First of all，attending sports activities is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood．Besides，by attending physical activities，people can have chances to contact and communicate with others，which can help them improve their skills．Nowadays our government provides many sports facilities for our citizens to do physical exercise．People can choose freely according to their interest and needs．
As for me，I am keen on all kinds of ball games，especially football and basketball．From these games，I have gained great pleasure and made many friends．In conclusion，everybody should not hesitate to attend sports activities．．

Answer 1

分析 這是關(guān)于體育鍛煉的一篇作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一一些人對體育鍛煉的負面看法；二論述體育鍛煉的好處；三自己喜歡的運動項目．
高分句型：
1．First of all，attending sports activities is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood．句子里First of all表示"首先"，和后面的Besides，Nowadays呼應(yīng)；attending sports activities 是動名詞做主語；relieve pressure 表示"緩解壓力"．
首先，參加體育活動是緩解壓力和保持愉快情緒的有效方法．
2．Besides，by attending physical activities，people can have chances to contact and communicate with others，which can help them improve their skills．句子里by attending physical activities是方式狀語，表示"通過參加體育鍛煉"； which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句people can have chances to contact and communicate with others．
此外，通過參加體育鍛煉，人們有機會和其他人接觸和交流，這有助于他們提高他們的技能．

解答 Physical exercise is a necessary part of our life．However，still some people do not like to attend sports activities．They think those activities waste their time and influence their study．（一些人對體育鍛煉的負面看法）
    Indeed，it is very unwise for people to keep distance from physical exercise．Physical exercise is very beneficial to us．First of all，attending sports activities is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood．【高分句型一】Besides，by attending physical activities，people can have chances to contact and communicate with others，which can help them improve their skills．【高分句型二】Nowadays our government provides many sports facilities for our citizens to do physical exercise．People can choose freely according to their interest and needs．（論述體育鍛煉的好處）
    As for me，I am keen on all kinds of ball games，especially football and basketball．From these games，I have gained great pleasure and made many friends．In conclusion，everybody should not hesitate to attend sports activities．（自己喜歡的運動項目）

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