Question

假如你是李華，你班同學于5月1日組織了郊游活動，請你用英文（100至120詞）寫一篇日記。內(nèi)容要點如下：

時間	地點	內(nèi)容
7:30	校門口	集合，乘大巴出發(fā)
8:30	the Forest Park．	爬山，尋寶（hunt for the hidden treasure），游湖
12:00	an open area,	野餐，歌舞，游戲
15:00	停車場 （parking lot）	返回

   要求：
層次清晰，表達連貫，使用適當?shù)捻樞蛟~，如first, then, after that等。
用適當?shù)男稳菰~、副詞來描寫景色、活動場面以及個人情感。
Saturday May 1, 2010
Sunny
Our class went on an outing today．

Answer 1

Saturday May 1, 2010
Sunny
Our class went on an outing today．
In the morning at 7:30, we gathered at the school gate and set off on a large bus．An hour later, we arrived at the Forest Park．Getting off, we started our journey at once．
First, we climbed the green hills and on the way tried our luck to hunt for the hidden treasure．Next, we toured around the lake on a comfortable boat．The beautiful scenery was really a feast for the eyes．Then by noon time, we landed and settled at an open area, where we enjoyed a wonderful picnic．After eating, we sang and danced happily and played some interesting games．The day passed quickly．Finally it was time for us to return．So at 3:00 pm, we cleaned the ground, made our way to the parking lot, got on the bus and left, laughing and shouting happily．
It was really an exciting trip since we had long been busy with our school work．

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