短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英主事課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)您修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語文錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.

 

1.去掉on.考查介詞。

2.stood改為standing或前加who

3.buy 改為bought;

4.too 改為so

5.frighteden 改為frightening

6.Unfortunate 改為Unfortunately

7.hard前加a

8.him 改為them

9.alone改為lonely

10.covered 改為 covering

【解析】

試題分析：上周日，我和父母去公園。在看老虎的窗口站著很多的游客。我們等了很長時(shí)間才買上票。我急切地去看老虎，匆忙中和父母走散了。沒有人陪伴，我感到非常孤獨(dú)。更為糟糕的是，我身上沒錢，只好步行回家。

1.去掉on.考查介詞。My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. 在以last，next，tomorrow開頭的短語前不加介詞，故去掉on。

2.stood改為standing或前加who�？疾槎ㄕZ。There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. 本句是there be句型，句中有謂語動(dòng)詞，所以stood改為非謂語動(dòng)詞，stood和邏輯主語visitors之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞，把stood改為standing。

3.buy 改為bought; 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。We waited a long time and buy three tickets。And 連接兩個(gè)謂語動(dòng)詞，表示連續(xù)的動(dòng)作，應(yīng)該都用過去時(shí)，把buy改為bought。

4.too 改為so考查副詞。I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.。從結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處是so ……that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，前面是be eager to do，所以把too改為so。

5.frightened 改為frightening 考查形容詞。 I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.。以-ed結(jié)尾的形容詞說明人的狀態(tài)，以-ing結(jié)尾的形容詞是描述事物的特征，此處指老虎，所以用frightening，意思是令人害怕的。

6.Unfortunate 改為Unfortunately 考查副詞。Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him。逗號(hào)前是副詞修飾全句，把Unfortunate改為Unfortunately。

7.hard前加a 考查冠詞。I had hard time looking for him。固定短語：have a …… time “過著…..的日子”，所以在hard前面加a。

8.him 改為them 考查代詞。I had hard time looking for him。從上文可知作者是和父母走散了，所以把him改為them。

9.alone改為lonely 考查形容詞。I felt alone without any companions. Alone“獨(dú)自一人”，lonely“孤獨(dú)的，寂寞的”，此處表示內(nèi)心的孤獨(dú)，把a(bǔ)lone改為lonely。

10.covered 改為 covering考查非謂語。so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. 從句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處是分詞做狀語，和邏輯主語I之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在分詞，把covered改為covering。

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