Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so去掉

【2】her→him

【3】say→said

【4】toilet前加the

【5】passing→passed

【6】was told

【7】immediate→immediately

【8】or→and

【9】mile→miles

【10】in→with

【解析】

【1】because為從屬連詞，不與并聯(lián)連詞so連用，故去掉so。

【2】前文講述的a man，故此處用him。

【3】并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用同樣的時(shí)態(tài)，此句前謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用過(guò)去時(shí)，此處也應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)，故say改為said。

【4】此處toilet是雙方都明白的，故用定冠詞the修飾。

【5】句中的主語(yǔ)message為pass的動(dòng)作承受者，故passing改為passed。

【6】tell后跟雙賓的及物動(dòng)詞，tell sb that-clause，tell后無(wú)間接賓語(yǔ)，故用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

【7】副詞修飾動(dòng)詞stopped，故immediate改為immediately。

【8】并列的不定式，表示肯定含義用and連接。

【9】15修飾mile，故應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【10】在某人的幫助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。