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7．某英文報正在就建立良好的師生關(guān)系進(jìn)行討論．你作為一名中學(xué)生，參與了討論．請你圍繞"A good relationship benefits us all"這個話題，根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文．
文章必須包括下列要點：1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性；
2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的；
3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系．
注意：開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
A good relationship benefits us allAs a middle school student，I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．【高分句型一】We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．【高分句型二】（建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性）
Therefore an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important．In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely．（你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的）To build a relationship of this kind，teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and express our feeling frankly．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students．【高分句型三】（如何才能建立這種關(guān)系）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇英語短文．就‘作為一名中學(xué)生，怎樣和老師建立良好的師生關(guān)系'談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?nbsp;
寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主． 
寫作要點：1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性；2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的 3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系． 
重要短語：build a good relationship with （建立良好的關(guān)系），show love and concern for sb（對某人關(guān)愛和關(guān)心…），seek support and advice（尋求支撐和幫助），benefit sb（對某人有益），in one's opinion （某人認(rèn)為），be filled with （充滿），exchange ideas freely（交換想法），joint efforts （合力），enjoy a friendly relationship（享受健康的關(guān)系）． 
【高分句型一】
1．①It is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers ②who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners． 
①此處是由"it"引導(dǎo)的形式主語，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"． 
②此處是關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the teachers"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語． 
【高分句型二】
2．We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot． 
①此處為"介詞+關(guān)系代詞which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"We students can always seek support and advice from them"，"which"指代前面主句中的"support and advice"． 
【高分句型三】
3．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students． 
此處是由"Only【狀語成分：從句/時間副詞/介詞短語】+一般疑問句形式"構(gòu)成的部分倒裝．

解答 A good relationship benefits us all
       As a middle school student，I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．【高分句型一】We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．【高分句型二】（建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性） 
      Therefore an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important．In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely．（你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的）To build a relationship of this kind，teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and express our feeling frankly．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students．【高分句型三】（如何才能建立這種關(guān)系）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．