【題目】假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,通過(guò)電子郵件向他介紹你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)。

1.何時(shí)開(kāi)始喜歡此項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng);

2.現(xiàn)在練習(xí)的情況;

3.給你帶來(lái)的益處。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;

3.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

Nice to receive your e-mail. I'd like to tell you about my favorite sport,_____________

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Tom,

Nice to receive your e-mail, I'd like to tell you about my favorite sport, table tennis, which is the most popular sport in China.

At the age of six, I began to learn to play table tennis from my parents, who are good at it. Since then, Ive fallen in love with it and spent most of my free time learning to play it. Now I often practice playing table tennis with my friends and coach in my spare time. With time going on, I have learned many practical skills and won the first place in my school.

In my opinion, not only does the sport help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends. Therefore, I like it best of all the sports.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析:本次作文要求根據(jù)李華的英國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示, 通過(guò)電子郵件向他介紹喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)。通過(guò)審題需要我們判斷出文章需要用第一人稱(chēng),時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)三段。

要點(diǎn)包括:1.何時(shí)開(kāi)始喜歡此項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng);2.現(xiàn)在練習(xí)的情況;3.給你帶來(lái)的益處。

寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要注意條理清楚,要點(diǎn)全面,結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。還要注意句式上的變化。例如:定語(yǔ)從句which is the most popular sport in China. who are good at it.倒裝句not only does the sport help me build up my body. fall in love with, in my spare time, build up等詞匯及Since then, With time going on, In my opinion, Therefore等連接詞。

評(píng)分原則:

1、本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。

2、評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。

3、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的,從總分中減去2分。

4、評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

5、拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。

6、如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差,以致影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

(三)、評(píng)分細(xì)則

第五檔(21-25分):完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。

——覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);

——應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;

——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力;

——有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

第四檔(16-20分):完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。

——雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;

——應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;

——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致;

——應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

第三檔(11-15分):基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。

——雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;

——應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;

——有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解;

——應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。

第二檔(6-10分):未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。

——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容;

——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限;

——有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解;

——較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。

第一檔(1-5分):未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者

——明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求;

——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限;

——較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解;

——缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫。

不得分(0分):未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息:內(nèi)容太少,無(wú)法評(píng)判;寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。

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