Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，你在3月5號到8號期間入住了一家酒店�，F(xiàn)對在此期間所遇到的問題向該酒店有關(guān)人員進行投訴，其中主要包括房間照明，食物以及員工的服務(wù)態(tài)度等方面。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100字左右

2、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)

3、可適當增加情節(jié)，使文章流暢

Dear Sir or Madam，

Faithfully yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I was a visitor in your hotel for three days during Mar 5 to Mar 8. I am sorry I have to say I was greatly

disappointed with the inconvenient service you provided.

First of all, it is the lighting facilities in the room. One of the lights is broken and another is so dark. Another

unpleasant factor of your hotel is the food quality. The steak I ordered is sour. The last but not the least shortcoming

of your hotel is the cold and indifferent service of the waiters. 1 asked one of them to bring newspaper to my room,

but no paper was delivered at last.

I am sure that you will agree with me on the point that your service is unacceptable. I trust that you will take

immediate steps to improve the situation and I'm looking forward to your reply.

Faithfully yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文要求以李華的身份項酒店投訴，所以要使用第一人稱和一般過去時和現(xiàn)在時相間的時態(tài)。要點：1. 你在3月5號到8號期間入住了一家酒店。遇見了一系列問題，感到很失望。2.具體問題：照明設(shè)施有損壞；提供食物味道不好；賓館服務(wù)員態(tài)度冷漠；3.提出整改意見：希望對方立刻采取措施改善服務(wù)并期待對方的回復。建議文章分成三段，每個要點為一段。在介紹所遇見問題時，建議使用合適的連接詞連接上下文。同時注意使用書信中的一些串聯(lián)成分。