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某班級學(xué)生近期準(zhǔn)備舉行一次討論學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣問題的班會活動，請你結(jié)合自身的學(xué)習(xí)實際，按以下提示，用英文寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣在學(xué)習(xí)中扮演了非常重要的角色，好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣能提高學(xué)習(xí)效果。
介紹一些好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議。
描述自己在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進(jìn)措施
參考詞匯：學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣（leaning habits） 學(xué)習(xí)效果（leaning efficiency）
在……扮演重要角色（play an important role in）減少，降低 decrease
Dear students,
Learning habits is very important to everyone .
                                                                                         
                                                                                          
                                                                                         
                                                                                         
                                                                                      
                                                                                         
                                                                                    
                                                                                       
                                                                                    
                                                                                      
                                                                                         
                                                                                      
                                                                                        
Thank you 

Answer 1

One possible version:
How Learning Habits Influence On Learning Results
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. There is a famous saying “Good habits lead to good endings.” , which shows the importance of habits.
“An apple a day keeps doctor away.” also shows how a healthy everyday habit helps to build up our body. Thus, good learning results can help us gain great learning results including high scores and abundant knowledge. At first learning habits form our ways of thinking and attitudes towards the content of our learning. Obviously, a good habit
can help us to speed up to reach our destinations. As we can see, cultivating a good habit is so important that I would like to introduce one kind of good learning habits ---keep a learning diary every day. We can start the habit by writing learning summary and remember to record something impressive and meaningful. Keep it in mind, and gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.
What’s more, I find out that I still have some bad learning habits as well. I can just concentrate on reading for a short time and I will conquer this problem by spend more effort on concentration practice.
I believe that through my efforts, I can gain good learning results by having good habits.

試題分析：本文要求討論學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣問題的主題班會，要把好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣在學(xué)習(xí)中扮演了非常重要的角色，好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣能提高學(xué)習(xí)效果寫清楚，并介紹一些好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議。特別注意要結(jié)合自己在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進(jìn)措施�？紤]時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱變化要符合行文要求。注意使用較高級的詞匯和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了諺語開頭：An apple a day keeps doctor away.和動名詞做主語。非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如build up，have a discussion 和benefit from還運用了固定句式so…that 。并注意了句子開頭的變化和句子之間的銜接如用thus 、and等等。