Question

【題目】假如你是李華，請你代表學(xué)生會寫一封郵件給本校交換生Chris，告知你們將組織一次校外勞動鍛煉并邀請他參加。

內(nèi)容包括：1. 活動目的；2. 活動安排；3. 表達(dá)期待。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Chris,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

I’m Li Hua. On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to tell you about a labor activity outside the school.

Considering students today seldom get involved in physical work or chores, the activity is intended to fuel our passion for manual work and highlight its importance. We will gather at the school gate at 8 this morning before a bus takes us to a nearby farm. Our task includes weeding, watering, applying fertilizers and spraying pesticides. Hopefully, this experience will remind us to treasure what we have and help us to develop a sense of responsibility for nothing is easily achieved.

Just tell me in advance if you are interested. Looking forward to your participation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封邀請信。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，假如你是李華，請你代表學(xué)生會寫一封郵件給本校交換生Chris，告知你們將組織一次校外勞動鍛煉并邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.活動安排；3.表達(dá)期待。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：a labor activity, get involved in, physical work or chores,fuel our passion, at the school gate, weeding, watering, applying fertilizers , spraying pesticides, treasure what we have, a sense of responsibility, in advance.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。