Question

俗話說：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我們的日常生活中，我們會遇到各種困難，因此，我們會需要他人的幫助；但同時，我們也要學會幫助他人。其實，幫助他人就是在幫助自己。請你結合身邊的事例，以“幫助”為話題，用英語寫一篇短文。注意：①無需寫標題，開頭已經給出，但不計入總詞數；②文中要結合你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；③文中不得透露任何個人和學校的真實信息；④詞數為80左右。
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.

Answer 1

So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫一篇關于互相幫助的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式.結合所談話題,可知本文寫成記述文比較容易下手.寫作中注意應用具體事例來說明相互幫助的意思.寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。