Question

假如你是第二中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生劉星，你要寫一封信給青少年專家Sigmund，告訴他你遇到的問題，并請求幫助。請根據(jù)下列表格中的信息完成這封信。

姓名	劉星
星座	Gemini
最喜歡的顏色	橙色，因為橙色代表著快樂。
個人特質(zhì)	善良、慷慨、自信，富有創(chuàng)造力
遇到的問題	1. 迷戀動漫真人秀(cosplay)，會花很多時間在這上面； 2. 父母對你不滿意，要求你放棄這個愛好； 3. … (至少再補充兩個)
目前需求	希望得到建議

注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右。書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

      2．書信須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順：

      3．書信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

Dear Sigmund，

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.

                                                                          

                                                                         

                                                                          

                                                                          

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

                                                         Your

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Sigmund，

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.My constellation is Gemini。My favorite color is orange  ,because orange stands for happiness.I think I am kind-hearted, I often help the olds.I am also generous and confident.I am a creative boy.I often think of new jokes to make my friends laugh.

  Though I am a good boy,  I have some problems .I like cosplay very much .I often spend a lot of time on cosplay.But my parents are strict with me,they want me to give up this hobby,because they think it wastes my time.I have no time to study.I like chatting on line,my mother says that is a bad habit.And sometimes I come home too late,my parents are not happy.They aksme to get home on time.I don’t know how to slove these problems.Can you give me some advice?

Yours,

Liu Xing

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)題目提示，我們應(yīng)該確定本文的時態(tài)應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時，人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱；注意描述的順序；注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，注意連詞的運用。注意句子的順暢，應(yīng)符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。這是一篇書信，主意格式及語氣。

【亮點說明】文中用了許多固定短語，如my favorite color，be strict with，have no time to do sth，chat on line；come home too late，hand in，on time，give up等，能夠很好的連接文章。根據(jù)表格，劉星有好的方面也有不好的方面，所以分開對比，效果更好。

考點：提綱作文。