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【題目】根據(jù)下面的提示以"Amazing animals"為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)在80左右。

1.世界上最大的動(dòng)物不是大象，是藍(lán)鯨(blue whale) ;

2.世界上最大的動(dòng)物在海洋里，但不是魚(yú);

3.它們很久以前就生活在地球上;

3.它們通常有30米長(zhǎng)，重1000千克。

4.它們是世界上最聰明的動(dòng)物之一，它們可以相互交談。當(dāng)然，我們是聽(tīng)不懂的。

Amazing animals

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

Amazing animals

Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world's biggest animals are in the sea-but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago. They're usually 30 metres long and 1，000 kilos heavy. They're one of the cleverest animals in the world. They can talk to each other, but people don't know what they are saying. What are they? They're called blue whales.

【解析】本文敘述了世界上最大的動(dòng)物是藍(lán)鯨，所以句子的主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該用第三人稱，敘述藍(lán)鯨現(xiàn)在的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述它們過(guò)去住在陸地上應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：one of the cleverest animals in the world世界上最聰明的動(dòng)物之一；talk to sb給某人交談；用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。