Question

完成一篇題為“Yao Ming”的文章，但不要逐字翻譯。
1.姚明，1980年出生于上海，身高2.26米；
2.九歲開(kāi)始打籃球，十八歲進(jìn)入國(guó)家隊(duì)，22歲加入NBA打球；2011年從NBA退役，然后成為上海籃球隊(duì)的老板，他讓上海籃球隊(duì)越來(lái)越厲害。
3.愛(ài)好：玩電腦游戲和閱讀；
4.對(duì)人有禮貌、友好，是青少年的偶像，也是中國(guó)人的驕傲。
Yao Ming

Answer 1

Yao Ming
Yao Ming is one of the most famous and successful basketball players in the world. He was born in Shanghai, China in 1980.He is 2.26 meters tall. When he was 9 years old, he began to play basketball. Then he joined in the national team at the age of 18.When he was 22 years old, he joined NBA. After a few years, he retired from NBA in 2011. Then he became the boss of Shanghai Basketball team. He makes Shanghai basketball team better and better.
Yao Ming likes playing basketball and reading. And he is very polite and friendly to others. Young people like Yao Ming very much. He is the pride of China. I like admire him very much.

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