Question

【題目】書面表達。

中考即將來臨,許多學生都感到學習緊張，壓力很大，他們很苦惱。為此，你們學校以課后放松方式進行了調(diào)查，請你以How to relax yourself? 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，向�？�投稿。

要點提示：1.學生壓力大及其表現(xiàn)；2.學會放松很重要；3.常見的放松方式；4.最適合你的放松方式；5.你的建議。

參考詞匯：壓力 pressure 壓力大的：stressed out

How to relax yourself?

Answer 1

【答案】How to relax yourself ?

Now many students often feel much pressure. They always feel tired because they have a lot of homework to do every day.

It’s important for the students to relax. It keeps your mind clear and make you not be nervous. There are many kinds of relaxing ways. For example, you can try to have enough sleep, and you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax yourself. You will study better after a good rest.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如a lot of，every day，keep your mind clear，many kinds of，for example，try to do，enough sleep，listen to，do some sports，hang out，turn off，don’t forget to等。而固定句型It’s important for the students to relax. 和并列句you can try to have enough sleep, and you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports.，以及While you are studying, don't forget to relax yourself.等復雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。