Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

第四屆“絲綢之路”寧夏國際馬拉松賽將于2020年5月舉行。假定你叫李華，你想成為本屆馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請用英語給組委會寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.個人優(yōu)勢：擅長英語，性格開朗，做事認(rèn)真，愛好運動。（至少再補充兩點）

2.個人承諾：盡力提供優(yōu)質(zhì)服務(wù)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：volunteer志愿者

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road”International Marathon will be held

in Ningxia in May，2020.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h “Silk Road"International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020.I'd like to be a volunteer.

I'm a girl/boy of 15，a middle school student.First of all，I do well in English.I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before. What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.

I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

【解析】

這篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如would like to be a volunteer，a girl/boy of 15，first of all，do well in English，be interested in，what's more，be ready to do，help others，be good at，try to do，look forward to等。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before./ What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.和I'm very glad that the 4h “Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020./ I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race./I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。