Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last night a strong wind as well as a heavily rain struck our area. News came that the trees in the park two kilometers away from our school was blown down. This afternoon, they set off the park to do some cleaning. The head of the park met us or gave us some advice on how to clear away the falling trees, branches and leaves. Some times later, we were working hard when it begins to rain. Because few of us had taken along umbrellas or raincoats, so we were all wet. A rain lasted about an hour and it was a pity that they had to stop our work.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last night a strong wind as well as rain struck our area. News came that the trees in the park two kilometers away from our school blown down. This afternoon, we set offthe park to do some cleaning. The head of the park met us gave us some advice on how to clear away the trees, branches and leaves. Some later, we were working hard when it to rain. Because few of us had taken along umbrellas or raincoats, we were all wet. rain lasted about an hour and it was a pity that had to stop our work.

【解析】

【文章大意】本文為記敘文。講述了一場(chǎng)風(fēng)雨過后作者學(xué)校附近的公園的許多樹木被吹倒，于是他們?nèi)ス珗@幫助清理的經(jīng)歷。

第一處：第一句話中的heavily改為heavy�？疾樾稳菰~。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處應(yīng)用形容詞heavy修飾名詞rain。

第二處：第二句話中的was改為were�？疾橹髦^一致。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知that引導(dǎo)的主語從句的主語為the trees in the park，故主語從句的謂語應(yīng)用were blown down。

第三處：第三句話中的off后加for�？疾榻樵~。句意：今天下午，我們出發(fā)去公園進(jìn)行打掃。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用介詞for構(gòu)成set off for表示＂出發(fā)/動(dòng)身去……＂。

第四處：第四句話中的or改為and�？疾檫B詞。句意：公園負(fù)責(zé)人迎接了我們并就如何清理倒下的樹木、樹枝和落葉提供了一些建議。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)把or改為and。

第五處：第四句話中的falling改為fallen�？疾榉侵^語動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用過去分詞fallen作定語，表示＂倒下的＂。

第六處：第五句話中的times改為time�？疾槊�詞。句意：一段時(shí)間之后，我們正在努力工作這時(shí)開始下雨了。time表示＂時(shí)間＂為不可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該為原形。

第七處：第五句話中的begins改為began�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故改為began。

第八處：第六句話中的so去掉�？疾檫B詞。根據(jù)because與so不能連用可知此處應(yīng)去掉so。

第九處：最后一句話中的A改為The�？疾楣谠~。句意：這場(chǎng)雨持續(xù)了大約一個(gè)小時(shí)，很遺憾我們不得不停止工作。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用定冠詞the表示特指。

第十處：最后一句話中的they改為we�？疾榇�詞。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)把they改為we。