Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò) (每小題1分，共10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Li Hua is an English learner who want to improve his reading skills, and he rarely practices. Yesterday he came and asked us for advices. ＂Any good athlete,＂ I said, ＂who will tell you he practices hardly to get in shape and achieve high honors. Seldom we hear of any athlete becoming a champion without any effort. We consider training to be a part of the game. Once he is in shape, it is easier of an athlete to succeed. Reading skills develop the same way. Any person who reads a lot are bound to improve his reading comprehension.＂ Feeling ashamed, Li Hua made upon his mind to practice more in future.

Answer 1

【答案】

Li Hua is an English learner who to improve his reading skills, he rarely practices. Yesterday he came and asked for . ＂Any good athlete,＂ I said, ＂will tell you he practices to get in shape and achieve high honors. Seldom we hear of any athlete becoming a champion without any effort. We consider training to be a part of the game. Once he is in shape, it is easier an athlete to succeed. Reading skills develop the same way. Any person who reads a lot bound to improve his reading comprehension.＂ Feeling ashamed, Li Hua made his mind to practice more in future.

【解析】

第一處：將want改為wants，因?yàn)殛P(guān)系詞指代an English learner，是單數(shù)，再根據(jù)上下文可判斷出，此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二處：將and改為but，語(yǔ)境表示，Li Hua想改善閱讀技能，但是他很少練習(xí)，此處應(yīng)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

第三處：將us改為me，因?yàn)榇颂帒?yīng)表示Li Hua向作者尋求建議，此處應(yīng)用me。

第四處：將advices改為advice，因?yàn)閍dvice是不可數(shù)名詞。

第五處：將who去掉，此處不是定語(yǔ)從句，這句話(huà)的主語(yǔ)是Any good athlete。

第六處：將hardly改為hard，hardly意為＂幾乎不＂，hard意為＂努力地＂，此處表示＂努力訓(xùn)練＂。

第七處：在Seldom后面加do，seldom是表達(dá)否定含義的詞，放于句首時(shí)，后面的句子應(yīng)用部分倒裝，又因此句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以應(yīng)在we前面加do。

第八處：將of改為for，因?yàn)閑asier不是表達(dá)人的品質(zhì)的形容詞。

第九處：將are改為is，因?yàn)榫渥拥闹髡Z(yǔ)Any person表示單數(shù)。

第十處：將upon改為up，make up one’s mind是固定短語(yǔ)，意為＂下定決心＂。