Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Everyone have a dream. We are on the way to achieving it whether the way is smooth or tough. As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three year, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got more closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure do discourage from me at times and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter what challenging it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】1 have—has

2 Senior前加a

3 year—years

4 that I have—what I have

5got more closer—

more改成much

6 discourage from 去掉from

7 at times后面的and—but

8 has—is

9 what—how

10 said—says

【解析】1．此處Everyone是不定代詞，做主語(yǔ)，后面的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式，故把have---has。

2．加a．題干中student是可數(shù)名詞，表示作為一名高三的學(xué)生，表示泛指，要用不定冠詞。

3.句意：在過去的三年里。此處用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把year---years。

4．that 改為what．題干中I have learnt from my teachers是一個(gè)句子，位于介詞with的后面，是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句．從句中learnt缺少賓語(yǔ)，要用連接代詞。

5.此處closer是比較級(jí)，more不能修飾比較級(jí)，故把more---much。

6．去掉from．題干中discourage是及物動(dòng)詞，不用介詞。故把from去掉。

7.句意：焦慮和壓力有時(shí)會(huì)讓我泄氣，但在老師和同學(xué)的鼓勵(lì)下，我想我會(huì)成功的。根據(jù)句意可知前后表示轉(zhuǎn)折，故把and---but。

8．has 改為is．there be結(jié)構(gòu)，表示某地有某物．故把has---is。

9．句意：不管它有多困難，我都會(huì)讓它變成現(xiàn)實(shí)。how修飾形容詞或副詞，故把what---how。

10．said 改為says．諺語(yǔ)表示的是客觀真理，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。