【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請你給英國朋友寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）你們原相約7月份一同爬長城；

（2）由于你自身某種原因（請說明具體原因），你無法按原計劃前往；

（3）表達(dá)你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Chris,

How is everything going?

I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July but now because my left leg was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文中的道歉信的書寫，要求考生寫一封郵件，表達(dá)對原計劃的改變：和朋友去爬長城，因為個人原因不能去，而表示歉意以及詢問能否把計劃推遲。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文：道歉信

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱為第一人稱

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.闡述之前的計劃

2.表達(dá)個人無法實現(xiàn)原計劃的原因

3.表達(dá)歉意及推遲計劃

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

plan to do, cause trouble, put off, hear from

第三步：連詞成句

I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July.

I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Can I suggest that we put it off until early August?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表示原因：because, The reason why …is that….

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but,

4.表結(jié)果關(guān)系： So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

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