Question

【題目】根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇視頻介紹，內(nèi)容包括：

基本信息： （1）片名：穹頂之下 （2）作者：柴靜，前中央電視臺(tái)主持人及記者 （3）發(fā)布時(shí)間：2015年2月28日 （4）拍攝過程：耗時(shí)大概一年，自費(fèi)拍攝，耗資過百萬 （5）內(nèi)容：長(zhǎng)達(dá)103分鐘，探討霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因，危害及解決方法。 （6）效應(yīng)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)點(diǎn)擊率破億，引發(fā)人們的熱議。 （7）目的：?jiǎn)酒鹑藗儗?duì)空氣污染的重視和鼓勵(lì)人們加入到環(huán)保行動(dòng)中。

穹頂：dome；霧霾：smog

[寫作要求] 1. 只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

A smog documentary titled Under the Dome was released on websites on February 28, 2015 by Chai Jing, a former reporter and host at China Central Television. It took a year or so to produce before being made public through websites and Char Jing, at her own expense, spent more than 1 million yuan making it. The 103-minute documentary deeply explored and highlighted the causes, the consequences of heavy smog and the ways to solve it. Since it was released, it has been under heated discussion, attracting more than 100 million viewers within 24 hours. The documentary aims to raise the public awareness about air pollution and encourage people to join in efforts to protect the environment.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文一些常見的短語spend money doing sth 花費(fèi)錢做某事；the way to do 做某事的方式 ；under heated discussion熱烈討論；It took a year or so to produce before being made public through websites and Char Jing, at her own expense, spent more than 1 million yuan making it.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到it take sb some time to do 花費(fèi)某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做某事，it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；Since it was released, it has been under heated discussion, attracting more than 100 million viewers within 24 hours這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)及atrracting做伴隨狀語；