【題目】假定你是學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人李華，計(jì)劃組織英文視頻配音比賽。請給你的外教 Mr. Albert寫一封郵件,請他幫忙審定策劃書，并就比賽的形式、內(nèi)容等方面提供建議。

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：配音dubbing

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【答案】Dear Mr. Albert,

I'm Li Hua from the English Club of our school. We're now planning to hold an English dubbing competition. I'm writing to ask you for some advice.

We've already written a plan for the competition, but given that this is the first time that we've held such an activity, I'm not quite sure whether the plan is suitable. So I hope you could spare some time to tell me your opinion on the plan. It would be great if you could also give us some advice on the form of the competition, the content of the material and so on.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，請求外教幫忙審定英文視頻配音比賽的策劃書，并就比賽的形式、內(nèi)容等方面提供建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時為主，兼用其它時態(tài)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表明寫郵件的原因

2.尋求幫助

1）請求幫忙審定策劃書；

2）詢問關(guān)于比賽的形式的建議；

3) 詢問關(guān)于比賽的內(nèi)容的建議。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

English Club; plan to do sth; hold an English dubbing competition; ask sb for some advice; a plan for; spare some time to do; on the form of ; the content of; look forward to.

第三步：連詞成句

1. I'm Li Hua from the English Club of our school.

2. We're now planning to hold an English dubbing competition.

3. I'm writing to ask you for some advice.

4. We've already written a plan for the competition, but given that this is the first time that we've held such an activity.

5. I'm not quite sure whether the plan is suitable.

6. I hope you could spare some time to tell me your opinion on the plan.

7. It would be great if you could also give us some advice on the form of the competition, the content of the material and so on.

8. Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

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