Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你從英國筆友Jim的來信中得知他所在的大學正在招募國際學生參加暑期夏令營活動。你有意參加。請給該大學寫封郵件，內容包括：

1. 表示感興趣；

2. 你打算參加的原因；

3. 詢問相關信息。

注意：1．詞數不少于50；

2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m from Hongxing Middle School, Beijing, China. I have heard about the summer camp for international students offered by your university. I am very interested in the project.

I have been looking for opportunities to experience campus life in the UK, which will definitely help improve my English and deepen my understanding of the English culture. Therefore, I’m writing to you to learn more about the upcoming project in your university.

I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information. First, what activities will be included in the summer camp? Apart from this, I also want to know the exact time and fee for the camp.

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據提示可知，假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你從英國筆友Jim的來信中得知他所在的大學正在招募國際學生參加暑期夏令營活動。你有意申請參加。請給該大學寫封郵件，內容包括：1. 表示感興趣；2. 你打算參加的原因；3. 詢問相關信息。

第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組）：hear about(聽說)；the summer camp (夏令營)；be interested in(感興趣)；look for(尋找)；deepen (加深)等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應用現(xiàn)在完成時、現(xiàn)在進行時、一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時和現(xiàn)在完成進行時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。