【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Jim,

How is everything going? Known that you are crazy about Peking Opera, I’m more than willing to introduce it to you.

Dating back to the late 18th century, Peking Opera becomes fully developed and recognized during Qing Dynasty. As a combination of music, vocal performance or dance, Peking Opera can offer audience with a feast for the eyes and ears. Performer wear colorful costumes and make-ups, that are in line with the personalities of the roles that they play.

I highly recommend you can visit the Mei Lanfang Theater to see a Peking Opera show. Hopefully, my introduction has helped you well understand Peking Opera than before. If you have any question, don’t hesitate to ask myself.

【答案】1. Known→ Knowing

2.becomes→became

3. Qing Dynasty 前加the

4.or→and

5.去掉with

6. Performer→ Performers

7.that→which

8.can→should 或去掉can

9.well →better

10. myself→ me

【解析】

本文是一封書信,作者向?qū)Ψ浇榻B了中國的京劇。

第一處:考查非謂語動詞。句意:知道你對京劇很感興趣,我想向你介紹一下它。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處使用非謂語動詞,Iknow之間是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,表示主動,用現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語,故Known改為Knowing。

第二處:考查時態(tài)。句意:京劇可以追溯到18世紀末,它在清代得到了充分的發(fā)展和認可。時間狀語“the late 18th century”表明應該用一般過去時,故becomes改為became

第三處:考查定冠詞。句意同上,Qing Dynasty 是專有名詞,應該用定冠詞修飾,故Qing Dynasty 前加the。

第四處:考查連詞。句意:京劇集音樂、聲樂、舞蹈于一體,為觀眾提供了一場視聽盛宴。根據(jù)句意可知dance 與前面的musicvocal performance是并列而非選擇關(guān)系,故or改為and。

第五處:考查offer的用法。句意同上,offer sb sth表示“向某人提供某物”,with是多余的,故去掉with

第六處:考查名詞的數(shù)。句意:表演者穿五顏六色的服裝、化符合他們角色特點的妝。performer是可數(shù)名詞,此處表示不止一個表演者,應該用復數(shù)形式,故Performer改為Performers。

第七處:考查非限定性定語從句。句意同上,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處為非限定性定語從句,關(guān)系詞指代先行詞make-ups(指物),并在從句中作主語,而that不能引導非限定性定語從句,故that改為which。

第八處:考查虛擬語氣。句意:我強烈建議你去梅蘭芳劇院看場京劇。recommend后的賓語從句應該用(shoulddo的虛擬語氣,其中should可省略,故can改為should 或去掉can。

第九處:考查副詞比較級。句意:希望我的介紹能幫助你更好地理解京劇!than before”表明此處用比較級形式,故well 改為better。

第十處:考查代詞。句意:如果你有什么問題,盡管問我。根據(jù)句意可知此處表示“我”而不是“我自己”,故myself改為me。

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