假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)文錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下面一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Hello, Peter. I’m very grateful for your concern about my coming exam. To tell you truth. I have been busy prepare for the exam recently. Some classmates are facing real stressed due to the exam, but I don’t take them so seriously. I always learn in a relaxing mood and I’m making a great progress. Now that I had tried my best, it doesn’t matter much to me what the result is.

In my opinion, we should keep a good balance among our study, rest or exercise. I believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.

I’d appreciate it if you could give me some good advices.

1.加上the

2.prepare →preparing

3.real →really

4.them →it

5.relaxing→relaxed

6.去掉a

7.had →have

8.or →and

9.succeeded →successful

10.advices →advice

【解析】

試題分析：本篇文章是作者寫(xiě)給朋友的信。信中介紹了作者對(duì)于考試的態(tài)度以及對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)的看法。

1.加上the 文中第二句，考查冠詞。本句考查固定短語(yǔ)to tell you the truth，意為說(shuō)實(shí)話(huà)。故加上the。

2.prepare →preparing 文中第二句，考查固定用法。本句考查短語(yǔ)be busy doing sth.，意為忙于做某事。故把prepare改成preparing。

3.real →really文中第三句，考查副詞。修飾形容詞stressed應(yīng)用副詞。故把real改成really，句意為：由于考試，有些同學(xué)感覺(jué)真有壓力。

4.them →it 文中第三句，考查代詞。本句中代詞代指的是上文提到的coming exam，故用it而非them。

5.relaxing→relaxed文中第四句，考查形容詞。本句考查的形容詞relaxing和relaxed之間的區(qū)別，relaxed意為輕松的、自在的，而relaxing意為令人放松的。根據(jù)句意，我總是在輕松的氣氛中學(xué)習(xí)。故把relaxing改成relaxed。

6.去掉a 文中第四句，考查冠詞。本題考查冠詞的用法，progress為不可數(shù)名詞，前面不可以用a，故去掉a。

7.had →have 文中第五句，考查時(shí)態(tài)。通過(guò)上下文可知，這里應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)而非一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故把had改成have。

8.or →and 文中第二段的第一句話(huà)，考查連詞。在本句中，study、rest及exercise直接存在并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系，故把or改成and，意為在學(xué)習(xí)、休息和運(yùn)動(dòng)之間保持平衡。

9.succeeded →successful 文中第二段中的第二句，考查形容詞。本句考查形容詞作表語(yǔ)，出現(xiàn)在be動(dòng)詞之后，擔(dān)當(dāng)表語(yǔ)，需要用形容詞successful，表示成功的。故把succeeded改成successful。

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