Question

【題目】假定你是李華，來自武漢光明中學(xué)。在新型冠狀病毒肺炎疫情期間，你新西蘭的筆友Andy通過組織募捐活動援助了你的城市，請你寫封郵件表示感謝。內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)感謝；

2.介紹情況；

3.你的期望。

注意詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已'為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒肺炎COVID-19;疫情epidemic

Dear Andy，

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Best wishes to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Andy,

Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone. We can’t thank you too much!

Currently, everything is improving. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.

Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. I believe so!

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封感謝信，感謝你新西蘭的筆友Andy通過組織募捐活動援助你的城市。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)感謝

2.介紹情況

3.你的期望

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

sums of；take measures t；do one’ parts；flood in；help sb. out

第三步：連詞成句

1. Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city.

2. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness.

3. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.

4. We can’t thank you too much!

5. Currently, everything is improving.

6. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak.

7. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. 8. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.

9. Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. 10. I believe so!

11. Best wishes to you!

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多高級句式，如：It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.這句話運用了強調(diào)句；使用了一些固定詞組，如sums of；take measures t；do one’ parts；flood in；help sb. out等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。