【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1)班的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記，記述你周日在小區(qū)里掃雪的過(guò)程。詞數(shù)不少于60。

Sunday, January 12 Snowy

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【答案】Sunday, January12 Snowy

This morning, when I looked out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I couldn’t wait to go outside with my camera. As I was walking on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground. I walked up and helped him out. Luckily, he was not injured. It was at that moment that I realized what I should do. Immediately, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot. An hour later, the thick snow was cleared away. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.

I felt very happy that I did something for my neighborhood.

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一篇日記。按照四幅圖的先后順序，記述周日在小區(qū)里掃雪的過(guò)程。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

要求：

1. 發(fā)現(xiàn)下雪

2.看見(jiàn)有人摔倒

3.掃雪的過(guò)程

4.描述自己的心情

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

look out of；couldn’t/can’t wait to do sth.；go outside；in front of；snow-covered；on the ground；walk up；at that moment；worked hard；clear away；thumbs up；start to do sth.等

第三步：連詞成句

1. When I looked out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily.

2. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I couldn’t wait to go outside with my camera.

3. As I was walking on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground.

4. It was at that moment that I realized what I should do.

5. Immediately, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot.

6. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.

7. I felt very happy that I did something for my neighborhood.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）：as；and；when；so…that…等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

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