20．假如你是美國(guó)某校高二學(xué)生劉凱，因?yàn)楦改傅脑虿坏貌浑x開原來的學(xué)校，回中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)．事發(fā)突然，沒來得及跟班上的同學(xué)和老師當(dāng)面道別．你決定在班級(jí)群里發(fā)貼．內(nèi)容包括：
1．道歉并解釋原因．
2．回顧高中生活，對(duì)老師和同學(xué)表達(dá)謝意．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
2．開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校．
Dear teachers and classmates，
I am so sorry for not saying good-bye to you，but I have to leave for China to study because of my parents'sudden job change．
Looking back on the past two years，I have so many beautiful memories．（高分句型一）I can still remember the first day I entered Senior High in America，I cried．What a shame!To my surprise，you didn't laugh at me．Instead，my deskmate told jokes to make me laugh．We soon became close friends and gradually I learned to be independent．At that time，it was really difficult for me to understand what the teachers said in class．（高分句型二）Thankfully，you-my teachers and classmates were always patient whenever I asked questions．（高分句型三）Never will I forget your kindness．
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Liu Kai

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是美國(guó)某校高二學(xué)生劉凱，因?yàn)楦改傅脑虿坏貌浑x開原來的學(xué)校，回中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)．事發(fā)突然，沒來得及跟班上的同學(xué)和老師當(dāng)面道別．你決定在班級(jí)群里發(fā)貼．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：道歉并解釋原因；回顧高中生活，對(duì)老師和同學(xué)表達(dá)謝意．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：leave for前往；because of由于，因?yàn)椋籐ook back on回顧；To my surprise令我驚訝的是；laugh at嘲笑；Thankfully充滿感激的是；
Looking back on the past two years，I have so many beautiful memories．（高分句型一）
At that time，it was really difficult for me to understand what the teachers said in class．（高分句型二）
Thankfully，you-my teachers and classmates were always patient whenever I asked questions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear teachers and classmates，
I am so sorry for not saying good-bye to you，but I have to leave for China to study because of my parents'sudden job change．
Looking back on the past two years，I have so many beautiful memories．（高分句型一）I can still remember the first day I entered Senior High in America，I cried．What a shame!To my surprise，you didn't laugh at me．Instead，my deskmate told jokes to make me laugh．We soon became close friends and gradually I learned to be independent．At that time，it was really difficult for me to understand what the teachers said in class．（高分句型二）Thankfully，you-my teachers and classmates were always patient whenever I asked questions．（高分句型三）Never will I forget your kindness．
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Liu Kai

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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