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9．假如你是李華，最近你的美國友Bob看到共享單車（shared-bike）非常流行但是也有各種亂象的新聞，來e-mail詢問你共享單車在中國的現(xiàn)狀．你給他寫一封回信，介紹共享單車并分享你的看法，回信包含以下要點：
1．共享單車的好處（兩點） 2．共享單車的亂象（兩種） 3．你對共享單車的看法
注意：1詞數100左右    2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢．
3．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
Dear Bob，
How's everything going？In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in ChinaI'm writing to tell you something about it and share some of my ideas with you．
Undoubtedly，the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of benefits．To begin with，riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far away．（高分句型一）What's more，the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution．
However，there is also some disturbing news connected with it．Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere，making the city roads messy and dangerous．（高分句型二）Worse still，some shared-bikes have been damaged，stolen or even burnt．
As far as I'm concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules，I'm definitely in favor of such a program．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours．

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息針對美國筆友Bob對成都共享單車（shared-bike）非常流行但是也有各種亂象的新聞來e-mail詢問你成都共享單車的現(xiàn)狀．你給Bob寫一封回信，介紹共享單車并分享你的看法，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：共享單車的好處（兩點）；共享單車的亂象（兩種）；你對共享單車的看法 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Undoubtedly毋庸置疑；To begin with首先；What's more而且；makes contribution to 有助于；However然而；Worse still更糟的是；As far as I'm concerned以我的觀點來看；as long as只要；
To begin with，riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far away．（高分句型一）
Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere，making the city roads messy and dangerous．（高分句型二）
 As far as I'm concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules，I'm definitely in favor of such a program．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
      How's everything going？In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in China．I'm writing to tell you something about it and share some of my ideas with you．
      Undoubtedly，the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of benefits．To begin with，riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far away．（高分句型一）What's more，the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution．
      However，there is also some disturbing news connected with it．Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere，making the city roads messy and dangerous．（高分句型二）Worse still，some shared-bikes have been damaged，stolen or even burnt．
      As far as I'm concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules，I'm definitely in favor of such a program．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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