Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

Answer 1

【答案】短文改錯(cuò)

In the summer holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, once I started the car, my mind blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the , “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “ left!” I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.

【解析】本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者在暑假期間考駕照第一天發(fā)生的故事。

71. 【答案與解析】eighteen改為eighteenth 考查數(shù)詞。在我十八歲生日后的那個(gè)暑假。eighteen意思為“十八，十八個(gè)”，表示數(shù)量， eighteenth表示“第十八個(gè)的”，故將eighteen改為eighteenth。

72 【答案與解析】first前加the或my 考查冠詞。我依然記得第一天是多么艱難。句中特指開始學(xué)駕照的第一天，所以在first前加上the。也可以加上my，my first day表示“我（學(xué)駕照）的第一天”。故在first前加the或my。

73 【答案與解析】so改為but 考查連詞。根據(jù)句意可知作者本以為自己已經(jīng)掌握了教練的話，結(jié)果一發(fā)動(dòng)車，腦中一片空白。所以前后文為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將so改為but。

74 【答案與解析】goes改為went 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前文中的started可知時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將goes改為went。

75 【答案與解析】word改為words 考查單復(fù)數(shù)。教練一直喊“加速”，“減速”，“左轉(zhuǎn)”。 word的意思主要是“單詞,消息”，words 可以表示為word的復(fù)數(shù)，表示某人說(shuō)的話。這里指教練說(shuō)的那些話，故將word改為words。

76 【答案與解析】Turning改為Turn 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析語(yǔ)境可知教練的話“加速”，“減速”，“左轉(zhuǎn)”都是祈使句，根據(jù)前文“Speed up!” “Slow down!”也可以看得出來(lái)。祈使句應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞原形，故將Turning改為Turn。

77 【答案與解析】much去掉 考查固定句型。我如此緊張以至于無(wú)法分辨哪個(gè)方向是左。固定句型so...that表示“如此...以至于....”，much為多余成分。故將much去掉。

78【答案與解析】 late改為later 考查副詞。做形容詞的時(shí)候，later是late的比較級(jí)，如：Their deadline is quite late. Ours is even later.（他們的截止日期很遲.我們的更遲.）做副詞的時(shí)候，late是遲的意思，later是稍后、隨后的意思。句意：幾分鐘之后。故將late改為later。

79【答案與解析】 suddenly改為sudden 考查形容詞。我緊急剎車。suddenly是副詞，表示“意外地，忽然地”。 sudden為形容詞，表示“突然的；迅速的”。a sudden stop表示“急剎車”。故將suddenly改為sudden。

80【答案與解析】 on改為of 考查介詞。分析語(yǔ)境可知作者表示“在路中間急剎車”，on the road表示“在路上”， the middle of the road表示“路的中央”，強(qiáng)調(diào)的是“the middle”。故將on改為of。