假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一 個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

    As we all know it,a hero is someone who have courage and is not afraid to help out. There are many hero in our society such as police officers and firefighters. My hero is my grandfather,which is hardworking,smart,inspired and full of energy. He retires from a company two months ago and now works as editor in a newspaper office. He still works hardly in his old age. My grandfather doesn’t give up easily. He often says, “I will do that I can to contribute to my family and society." In my opinion,our grandfather is really a man whom I should learn from.

1. . .. we all know it...   去掉 it

2. . .. who have courage ...   have→has

3. There are many hero ...   hero→heroes

4. . .. which is hardworking...   which→ who

5. . .. inspired and full...   inspired→ inspiring

6. He retires from ...   retires →retired

7. . .. works as editor ...   editor前加an

8. . .. still works hardly ...   hardly→hard

9. . .. do that I can ...   that→what / whatever   

10. . .. our grandfather is ...   our→ my

題目來源：2016年英語周報高三新課標 > 第43期 2015-2016高三課標

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