Question

【題目】根據(jù)題目所提出的具體要求，在答題卡寫出一篇連貫完整的短文。詞數(shù)不少于60。

假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim計劃暑假來北京進行為期三天的旅行，發(fā)郵件請你推薦行程安排。請你參考下面提供的信息給他回郵件，介紹行程安排，并給出推薦理由。

郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

visit Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum

go to the Great Wall

see pandas in Beijing Zoo

Dear Jim,

I’m so glad you’re coming to Beijing this summer. I’d like to introduce some wonderful places to you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m so glad that you’re coming to Beijing this summer. I’d like to introduce some wonderful places to you.

You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square, one of the largest squares in the world. Then, I advise the Palace Museum, where the emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live. I am sure you will be amazed at its magnificence. The Great Wall should be strongly recommended as it is a must-see for most of the foreign visitors. If you don’t have a tight schedule, Beijing Zoo is a good choice for you will see lovely pandas, which are typical of China.

I hope my recommendations are helpful to you. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求回一封郵件。

第一步：

審題： 郵件 推薦游覽北京的行程安排

人稱：第二人稱

時態(tài)：一般將來時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分表示很高興Jim來北京，愿意推薦游玩的景點，第二部分推薦的行程安排，第三部分希望你的推薦對Jim有幫助。

要點：

1. 表示很高興Jim來北京，愿意推薦游玩的景點

2. 推薦的行程安排

①從游覽天安門開始，然后游覽故宮

②長城是必去之地

③行程不是很緊的話，推薦去北京動物園看熊貓

3. 希望你的推薦對Jim有幫助

第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語）

introduce sth. to sb.；start with；advise；be amazed at；recommend；a must-see；have a tight schedule；a good choice；be typical of；be helpful to

第三步：連詞成句

(1)I’m so glad that you’re coming to Beijing this summer.

(2) I’d like to introduce some wonderful places to you.

(3) You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square.

(4) Tian’anmen Square is one of the largest squares in the world.

(5) I advise the Palace Museum.

(6) The emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live in the Palace Museum.

(7) You will be amazed at its magnificence.

(8) I strongly recommend the Great Wall.

(9) It is a must-see for most of the foreign visitors.

(10) If you don’t have a tight schedule, Beijing Zoo is a good choice.

(11) You will see lovely pandas.

(12) Pandas are typical of China.

(12) I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進行遣詞造句，適當?shù)剡\用句型，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點詞匯)

將第2個句子作同位語,連接下面兩個句子

(3) You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square.

(4) Tian’anmen Square is one of the largest squares in the world.

→You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square, one of the largest squares in the world.

將第2個句子作定語從句，連接下面兩個句子

(5) I advise the Palace Museum.

(6) The emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live in the Palace Museum.

→I advise the Palace Museum, where the emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live.

為避免句式重復(fù)單調(diào)，用被動語態(tài)改寫下面的句子

(8) I strongly recommend the Great Wall.

→The Great Wall should be strongly recommended.

將第2個句子作定語從句，連接下面兩個句子

(11) You will see lovely pandas.

(12) Pandas are typical of China.

→You will see lovely pandas, which are typical of China.

適當?shù)剡\用高級詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。