Question

【題目】Chocolate has come a long way through history, and one of the reasons is the Ferrero family, the creators of the world-famous Ferrero Rocher chocolate treats．The history of this family business starts back in the 1940s, when Pietro Ferrero and his wife, Piera, transformed a pastry shop into a factory．There, Pietro and his son, Michele, let their creativity lead them to form the building blocks of the company．Eventually, Michele took over the operation and set his sights on making the best products possible.

Michele’s efforts paid off．He turned his father’s creations into globally sold and consumed products．One of their most successful products, Nutella, had become a staple food in many homes．The third generation now runs the company．Michele’s sons, Pietro and Giovanni worked side by side as managing directors for ten years until an accident resulting in Pietro’ death．Still inspired by his family and their hard work and determination, Giovanni is guiding Ferrero into the future.

While staying true to the Ferrero motto of “work, create, and donate”, he is making sure his family’s business is an example of success in the past, present, and future.

［寫作內容］

1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

2．以約120個詞談談Ferrero及其家人成功制作巧克力對你的啟迪，內容包括：

（1）描述人們創(chuàng)業(yè)的艱辛。

（2）分析人們創(chuàng)業(yè)成功的原因。

（3）Ferrero及其家人成功制作巧克力對你的啟迪。

［寫作要求］

1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

［評分標準］

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

With three generations’ efforts of the Ferrero family, Ferrero, a chocolate company, has developed into a world-famous business from the then pastry shop through their creativity, hard work and determination．

It’s no easy job to start a business．You may not only suffer from hardships but also run across unexpected risks．You need to deal with all kinds of people and learn many new things through your work, especially when you are green hands in a new field.

What account for one’s success in his work include determination and hard work．It also requires of him qualities like honesty, patience and bravery．

As for us students, we all have a dream of our future．After setting a goal of our life, we must devote ourselves to achieving it．No matter what difficulty we meet, just try our best to overcome it．Only in this way can we live our dreams．

【解析】

試題分析：本題要根據英文提示信息寫出一篇作文，這對于學生來說比較有難度，首先要理解短文的意思，然后根據短文的內容寫出作文，需要寫出：（1）描述人們創(chuàng)業(yè)的艱辛。（2）分析人們創(chuàng)業(yè)成功的原因。（3）Ferrero及其家人成功制作巧克力對你的啟迪。 寫作時注意：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照方位順序進行介紹。3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態(tài)。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如Ferrero, a chocolate company, has developed into a world-famous business from the then pastry shop through their creativity用了現在完成時，Only in this way can we live our dreams是一個倒裝句， With three generations’ efforts of the Ferrero family用了with的復合結構，是一篇不錯的提綱類作文