Question

【題目】假設你是李華，最近從報紙上得知2017敦煌文博會“Silk Road (Dunhuang) International Cultural Expo”將于9月舉行，組委會現(xiàn)面向全社會招募志愿者，要求英語口語流利，了解絲路文化及國外習俗等。請給組委會寫一份信申請該職位。

注意：1. 字數(shù)100字左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

4. 參考詞匯：recruit v. 招聘

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to get the news from the local newspaper that __________________________________________

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Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to get the news from the local newspaper that some volunteers are recruited for the Expo this year. I am really so interested in it that I’d like to apply for it.

First, please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, a student from one of the best senior high schools in Lanzhou. I have ever visited some English countries, therefore I am very good at spoken English and pretty familiar with English traditions and customs. On the other hand, I have been a volunteer for Lanzhou International Marathon in the last 3 years, so I am really experienced in being a volunteer.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：

本文是寫給2017敦煌文博會組委會的申請信，作者希望成為此次活動的志愿者。文章題干給出的對志愿者的要求也就是作者需要突出介紹自己的內(nèi)容。成文時應注意以下幾點：(1) 內(nèi)容完整。(2)人稱使用要恰當。(3)時態(tài)：現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：第一部分：寫作目的（知道2017敦煌文博會組委會在招募志愿者，對此很感興趣，想要申請）；第二部分：介紹自己（介紹的優(yōu)點要符合組委會對志愿者的要求，如英語口語流利，了解國外文化，有志愿者的經(jīng)驗）；第三部分：表達愿望（希望自己可以得到機會）。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：so …that句型I am really so interested in it that I’d like to apply for it；形式賓語it后接賓語從句的用法I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to hearing from you.。2.使用了過渡詞語：First，On the other hand等。3.使用了重要短語：apply for申請；be good at擅長；look forward to期待；hear from收到來信。