【題目】每個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)都是一種蛻變的過(guò)程,從幼稚走向成熟,從逆境走向成功。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞以上 的短文,談?wù)勀阍诔砷L(zhǎng)過(guò)程中所經(jīng)歷的最大的一次蛻變。

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

【答案】From immaturity to maturity,from adversity to success, everyone’s growing progress is a kind of changing one. So is mine .

At first,I was shy and I used to stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class. I only like playing computer games at home. Because I hated English ,my English mark is very low in the exam.Later ,a girl came to my class,and she changed my life.She became my best friend. She asked me to play outside with others .She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud ,to talk to her in English. I also practice English after school. Gradually, My English score was higher and higher. Now,I am a confident and outgoing girl .I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me .

【解析】試題分析:這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫(xiě)其變化前后的樣子、促成其轉(zhuǎn)變的主要原因和其為此變化付出的努力。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用,寫(xiě)過(guò)去用一般過(guò)去時(shí),轉(zhuǎn)變后的現(xiàn)在用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要求主次分明,詳略得當(dāng),語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短詞為文章增色不少,首先是from ...to..., a kind of,used to,instead of,help with.等固定詞組,其次還運(yùn)用了at first,later,gradually, now等使層次更清晰。Because I hated English ,my English mark is very low in the exam.原因狀語(yǔ)從句;I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me .so―――that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句;另外,文章整體內(nèi)容飽滿,條理清晰,表達(dá)流暢。

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】As they walk down the halls during their years together at Shady Side, our boys and girls —— so soon to become men and women —— are learning to think, to work, to question, to be 1 and 2, to 3with others, to laugh at their mistakes and to act 4 when 5 comes their way.

Sir William Osler, a famous Canadian doctor, 6 the value of 7 by saying, "No man is really happy 8 a hobby, and it makes precious little 9 what the outside 10 may be."

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】One of my father’s favorite __【1】__ (say) as I was growing up was “Try it!”. I couldn’t say I didn’t like something, __2_ it might be, until after I tried it. Over the years I’ve come to realize how much of my success I owe to my __3_ (accept) of those words as one of my values. My first job was just one I decided to try for a couple of years until I determined what I wanted to do as a career. __4_ (actual) I believed I would work for a few years, get __5_ (marry), stay home and raise a family, so I didn’t think the job I took mattered that much. I couldn’t __6__ (be) more mistaken. I mastered the skills of that __7__ (begin) level position and I was given the opportunity to move up through the company into __8_ (differ) positions. I accepted each new opportunity with the thought, “Well, I’ll try it; __9__ I don’t like it I can always go back to my __【10__ (early) position.” But I was with the same company for the past 28 years.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華,最近從報(bào)紙上得知2017敦煌文博會(huì)“Silk Road (Dunhuang) International Cultural Expo”將于9月舉行,組委會(huì)現(xiàn)面向全社會(huì)招募志愿者,要求英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)流利,了解絲路文化及國(guó)外習(xí)俗等。請(qǐng)給組委會(huì)寫(xiě)一份信申請(qǐng)?jiān)撀毼弧?/span>

注意:1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4. 參考詞匯:recruit v. 招聘

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to get the news from the local newspaper that __________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】There is really little doubt that the British are different from other members of the European Community as some recent statistics demonstrate(說(shuō)明). Take marriage for instance. Nowhere else in Europe—except for Portugal—has fewer marriages. Yet Britain has the highest divorce rate-almost half of all marriages end up on the rocks. Italian couples are six times more likely to stick together. Of those who divorce, British men seem far more willing to take another chance than women divorcées.

However, Britain measures up pretty well in other departments. It is the second safest place in Europe to drive a car, beaten only by Norway. There are many more fatal road accidents in France, Spain and Portugal. Also, the reputation the British have for being work-shy is not confirmed(確認(rèn)) by statistics. At an average of forty-four hours a week they beat even the hard-working Germans by four hours. Unfortunately, there is a downside to this. Britain and Holland share the worst rates of job absenteeism(曠工) in the whole of Europe. The Dutch and the British, so alike in many superficial(表面的) senses, differ markedly in one area: The British lock up twice as many people as the Dutch do.

1Which country seems to have the most safe marriages?

A. Portugal B. Italy

C. Britain D. France

2Divorced men in Britain ______ .

A. usually do not get married again

B. are more likely to marry again than divorced women

C. generally remarry women who have not already been married

D. are usually willing to live with women divorcées

3Which of these countries has the worst road accident record?

A. France B. Norway

C. Britain D. Italy

4Which of these statements is true?

A. The British work as many hours as the Germans.

B. Britain has Europe's best road safety record.

C. Britain is tougher on criminals than Dutch.

D. The British work fewer hours than the Germans.

5Which people appear to be the most conscientious(勤懇的) workers?

A. The Dutch. B. The French.

C. The Spanish. D. The British.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】_____ of their bad habits,the boys switched from being dependent on their parents to _______ for others.

A. Having rid; sacrificing B. To rid; sacrifice

C. Rid; sacrificing D. Having been rid; sacrifice

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】閱讀下面材料,在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(不多于3個(gè)單詞)或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。

What was supposed to be __【1】___ fun climb became a test of friendship for two young people from Canada last Saturday. Jeremy Savage and Ian Marshall, both aged 17, went __2___(camp) with their parents for the weekend. On Saturday morning, they decided to climb the mountain by themselves while their parents relaxed at the campsite. After three hours, they reached the top _3_ no problems.

However, trouble began when they started the climb down the mountain. On one very __4】_ (danger) part of the path, Ian fell three meters off the side of the path. Jeremy was able to climb down to where Ian was. Ian was _5_ (bad) injured and could not move. They had to wait and _6__(hope) that someone would come and help them. As the evening grew __7_ (dark), Ian told Jeremy to leave him and go back to their parents, but he still did not leave. Jeremy thought __8__ was not safe for Ian to be alone. The night was cold and windy, and Jeremy used his jacket and extra shirt to keep Ian warm.

At sunrise, Jeremy decided that the only way ___9__ (help) his friend was to carry him. So they started the long climb back to their parents. Finally, after four hours, they arrived at the campsite __【10their parents were waiting, “I’ll always remember what Jeremy did for me.” said Ian. “He saved my life.”

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

It is a joke of the fire alarm. When Sophie was cleaning the blackboard after his class ended last night, the fire alarm went off. The alarm was sounded like the busy signal on the phone, but 1,000 times loud. Instead of leave the building, she walked about to see that the problem was. The school seemed to be empty. Then she walked by one room, but saw about seven students inside. She told everyone to leave immediate, and after almost five minutes, both of them left the building. Then a school police office arrived the school and walked around the area. He said it was a false alarm and used his key to turn down the alarm.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:

【題目】Therewas a story many years ago of a school teacher—Mrs. Thompson. She told the children on the first day that she loved them all the same. But that was a lie. There in the first row was a little boy named Teddy Stoddard. He did not play well with the other children and he always needed a bath. She did not like him.

ThenMrs. Thompson got to know that Teddy was actually a very good boy before the death of his mother. Mrs. Thompson was ashamed of herself. She felt even worse when, like all her other students, Teddy brought her a Christmas present too. It was his mother’s perfume(香水).

Teddysaid,“Mrs. Thompson, today you smell just like my Mom used to.” After the children left she cried for at least an hour. On that very day, she stopped teaching reading, writing and math. Instead, she began to teach children.

Mrs. Thompson paid particular attention to Teddy. The boy’s mind seemed to come alive. The more she encouraged him, the faster he improved. By the end of the sixth grade, Teddy had become one of the smartest children in the class.

Sixyears went by before she got a note from Teddy. He wrote that he had finished high school, third in his class, and she was still the best teacher he ever had in his whole life. He went to college. Mrs. Thompson got two more letters from him with the last one signed, Theodore F.Stoddard, M.D. (醫(yī)學(xué)博士)

Thestory doesn’t end there. On his wedding day, Dr Stoddard whispered in Mrs. Thompson’s ear,“Thank you, Mrs. Thompson, for believing in me. You made me feel important and showed me that I could make a difference.”

Mrs.Thompson, with tears in her eyes, whispered back,“Teddy, you have it all wrong. You were the one who taught me that I could make a difference. I didn’t know how to teach until I met you.”

1What did Mrs. Thompson do on the first day of school?

A. Shemade Teddy feel ashamed.

B. Sheasked the children to play with Teddy.

C. Shechanged Teddy’s seat to the front row.

D. Shetold the class something untrue about herself.

2What did Mrs. Thompson find out about Teddy?

A. Heenjoyed playing with others.

B. Heoften told lies.

C. Heneeded motherly care.

D. Hewas good at math.

3In what way did Mrs. Thompson change?

A. Shecared more about educating students.

B. Sheno longer liked her job as a teacher.

C. Shebecame stricter with her students.

D. Shetaught fewer school subjects.

4Why did Teddy thank Mrs. Thompson at his wedding?

A. Shehad given him encouragement.

B. Shehad taught him how to judge people.

C. Shehad kept in touch with him.

D. Shehad sent him Christmas presents.

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案