Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down  walls
注意：①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­

Answer 1

Smile has magical power. I think it can drive winter from people’s face.
I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in this new school several months ago, when I found it difficult to follow my English teacher in the first English class. The teacher spoke English throughout the class, which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students. After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. The smile shined the whole day and the following days. A week later, I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.
Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, I begin to become confident.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是敘述一件事情來(lái)反映主題，所以要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。但本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如drive from，volunteer，take charge of等和find it + 形容詞 + to + v句型等。還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，after 與現(xiàn)在分詞連用，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如：thanks to，a week later等等。