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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Longjing tea, it has topped the list of the ten most famous teas in China with its color, taste and shape, is named after its production region—Longjing Village of West Lake.

Thanks for Emperor Qianlong of the Qing Dynasty, the tea has earned a high reputation. The story went that Emperor Qianlong was visited the mountain during his Hangzhou travels, and he saw some ladies picking the tea at the foot of the mountain. He was very interested in their movements that he decided to have a go himself. While picked the tea, he received the news of his mother’s illness, so he carelessly puts the leaves in his sleeve and left Hangzhou for Beijing. He visited his mother immediately upon his arrival in Beijing. His mother smelt the fragrance of the tea leaves from his sleeves and wanted to have taste. After drinking cup of tea, she found herself completely refreshing, and she even praised it as cure for all illnesses. From now on, the tea was listed as the tribute tea (貢茶).

Answer 1

【答案】1. it→which

2. for→to

3. 去掉was

4. very→so

5. picked→picking

6. puts→put

7. sleeves→sleeve

8. refreshing→refreshed

9. cure前加a

10. now→then

【解析】

本文是一篇說明文。文章講述了龍井茶的發(fā)展歷史。

第一處： 考查定語從句。此處應為which引導的非定語從句，來修飾Longjing tea，從句中作主語，指物，故將it改為which。

第二處： 考查固定短語。此處意為“多虧了”，用thanks to，故將for改成to。

第三處： 考查動詞語態(tài)。謂語動詞visit與主語Emperor Qianlong是主動關系，故用主動語態(tài)， 故去掉was。

第四處： 考查固定句型。so...that...是固定句型，表示“如此……以至于……”，故將very改為so。

第五處： 考查非謂語動詞。go+doing sth.是固定短語，表示“去做某事”，接現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語，故將picked改為picking。

第六處： 考查動詞時態(tài)。根據其后的and left可知此處需用一般過去時，故將puts改為put。

第七處： 考查名詞的單復數。根據上文，可知當年乾隆只是把少量茶葉放在一只袖子里，用單數，故將sleeves改為sleeve。

第八處： 考查非謂語動詞。根據語意，此處是用來形容herself，表示人的感受，用ed形式形容詞，故refreshing改成refreshed。

第九處： 考查冠詞。根據語意，此處意為“一種治療辦法”，表示泛指，故cure前加a。

第十處：考查固定搭配。句意：從那時起，這種茶被列為貢茶。根據語意，此處意為“自那以后”，故將now改成then。