Question

請結(jié)合圖片內(nèi)容，按要求用英語寫作。

要求：（1）簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容；
（2）結(jié)合生活實際，發(fā)表你的看法；
（3）要緊扣圖片，有明確的觀點；
（4）詞數(shù)不少于60；
（5）在答題卡上作答。
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                      

Answer 1

As can be seen in the picture, a tall tree with a big heart-shaped crown is standing there, protecting her two kids, one of whom is rather small and the other has to bend over.
The picture tries to tell us that the mother tree, in name of love, leaves too limited space for her kids to grow up, which is often the case in our social life. Some parents love and care their kids so much that they make every effort to protect them. In this way parents usually instruct their kids in every aspect and even control their lives, leaving no space for them to grow freely.
In my perspective, children need more freedom to grow up, even if they will meet with failures or frustrations. So, parents, give more space to your kids if you really love them and want to protect them.

試題分析： 考察看圖作文。由這幅圖，我們可以理解講述的是父母親對于孩子的關(guān)愛�？梢詮母改笇�孩子無微不至的關(guān)愛入手，也可以通過具體的例子來說明這一切。看圖作文對于考生的要求很高，要求考生有很強的審題能力，能根據(jù)圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的。然后根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容組織要點，要注意要點的完整性，不能有遺漏。在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】：首先作者的連接句運用得很到位，如第一句As can be seen in the picture；這是看圖作文經(jīng)常使用的串聯(lián)句，顯得訓(xùn)練有素。在語言的組織以及觀點陳述方面很有條理，表達到位。高級句型也有很多，如protecting her two kids分詞做狀語；one of whom is rather small and the other has to bend over.非限制性定語從句；