Question

目前，我國(guó)大力提倡構(gòu)建節(jié)約型社會(huì)。下圖是你在校園所見(jiàn)到的一些現(xiàn)象，假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)起草一份英文倡議書(shū)，描述這些現(xiàn)象，并向全校師生發(fā)出倡議，杜絕浪費(fèi)，節(jié)約能源。

注意：1.可根據(jù)需要補(bǔ)充與文章有關(guān)的信息。
2.詞數(shù)120左右。
3.開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear teachers and students,
Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society.                  
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Students’ Union

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society. It is everybody’s duty to help reach this goal.
However, not everybody has realized the importance of it. For example, sometimes lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn off the tap after using it and have water running all the time. Usually only one side of our paper is used, causing much waste.
It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are turned off when we leave the rooms. Remember to turn off the tap immediately after using it. What’s more, paper should be printed or written on both sides.
In a word, if everybody has the awareness of reducing waste and saving energy, we can contribute to our society.
Students’ Union

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談?wù)摰氖嵌沤^浪費(fèi)，節(jié)約能源�？磮D作文要求考生將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫(huà)用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫(huà)中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類(lèi)的寫(xiě)作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說(shuō)明文或議論文，考生則首先要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫(huà)的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握?qǐng)D畫(huà)的中心思想，寫(xiě)出圖畫(huà)要反映的內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is everybody’s duty to help reach this goal.這是it做形式主語(yǔ)的用法，Usually only one side of our paper is used, causing much waste.這句話是現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste.這句話用的是It is time加從句的虛擬語(yǔ)氣，F(xiàn)or example,firstly，what’s more等關(guān)聯(lián)詞用的也很好。