Question

12．假設某旅行社招聘駐San Francisco兼職導游，請根據以下信息寫一份求職信
注意：詞數(shù) 100 左右；可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使得行文連貫；
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姓名	李明	年齡	25		國籍		中國
經歷	舊金山留學3年，曾擔任當?shù)夭┪镳^志愿者
技能	•英語口語流利，懂一些日語、法語； •（自擬一項）			電話		0513-33750

Dear Sunshine Travel Agency，
I would like to apply to be a part-time tour guide you are looking for．
My name is Li Ming，a 25-year-old Chinese．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．I also acquire a good knowledge of the multiculture and history of the city owing to my volunteer experience at the local museum．
In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．Meanwhile，I work well under pressure．
I believe that I have the qualifications you expect for the job．I would be grateful if you would consider employing me．My phone number is 0513-33750．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一份求職信．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內容包括：一表明書信目的；二介紹自己的技能和工作經歷；三寫明自己的電話，期盼得到答復．高分句型：1．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．句子里Having studied here for 3 years是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做原因狀語，表示"已經在這里學習三年了"；am familiar with 表示"熟悉…"．已經在這里學習三年了，所以我對舊金山著名的旅游景點很熟悉．2..In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．句子里In terms of表示"就…而言"；oral English表示"口語"；which引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句；enables表示"使能夠"；communicate with表示"和…交流"．說道做導游的技能，我英語的口語很好，還能說一點日語和法語，再加上我的母語，這些會使我自信能夠和來自不同地方的人交流．

解答 Dear Sunshine Travel Agency，
   I would like to apply to be a part-time tour guide you are looking for．（表明書信目的）
   My name is Li Ming，a 25-year-old Chinese．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．【高分句型一】I also acquire a good knowledge of the multiculture and history of the city owing to my volunteer experience at the local museum．In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．【高分句型二】Meanwhile，I work well under pressure．（介紹自己的技能和工作經歷）
    I believe that I have the qualifications you expect for the job．I would be grateful if you would consider employing me．My phone number is 0513-33750．（寫明自己的電話，期盼得到答復）
                                                               Yours，
                                                              Li Ming

點評 考查圖表類作文．寫作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內容有關的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關的要點，列出寫作提綱．在體裁明確、中心突出、要點清晰的前提下，應該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達出來．表達時應該綜合運用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習慣方式，用地道的英語表達出來，力求做到語言準確無誤．