Question

請根據(jù)下面提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
Everyone hopes to succeed   overnight, but we should be    aware that “ a journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step” .
注意: ①無須寫標(biāo)題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例；
④不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

One possible version:
With competition becoming increasingly fierce, everyone dreams about succeeding overnight,but success may be a long process, in which you must work hard step by step.
Here is an experience that deeply impressed me.
Three years ago, when I came to the high school, I was poor in English. I wanted to conquer it in a short time but I failed just because of the lack of a solid foundation. Helped by my teacher, I decided    to start    from the beginning, attaching importance to standard pronunciation, basic vocabulary and practical grammar. Moreover, I made it a rule to recite five sentences each day. Then, the longer I learnt, the more progress I made. Now what I'm proud of is that I've won a prize in English Talent Competition.
Judging from    the experience, I firmly    believe that on    the way    to success ,there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs.

試題分析：本文是篇半開放性作文。有部分的文字提示給出了一個討論的話題是“千里之行始于足下”；從自己生活中的一些小事中舉一到兩個小的例子來進(jìn)行說明。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)明確，思路清晰。分三段把內(nèi)容要點都涵蓋了。同時注意應(yīng)用較高級的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如in which you must work hard step by step. because of the lack of a solid foundation，,there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs.，還運用了Judging from    the experience.非謂語動詞作狀語等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Moreover，Then,等等。