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【題目】離石擁擠的道路給人們帶來(lái)不便，引發(fā)社會(huì)廣泛熱議。是否應(yīng)該擁有私家車，有人贊成，有人反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你以Whether or not --- Owning a private car為題，用英語(yǔ)論述人們的觀點(diǎn)，并給出你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

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Whether or not --- Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in LiShi City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

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【答案】

Whether or not --- Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort. For example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.

However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. What’s more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem.

Personally, I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。1.使用了masses of ,a heated discussion,Different ideas vary from person to person,rely on,object to doing sth,give off等短語(yǔ)和俗語(yǔ)。2.長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，語(yǔ)法功底見深。使用了非謂語(yǔ) 從句等高中難點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法3.使用高級(jí)詞匯，文章斐然，使用claim，poisonous，convenience等高級(jí)詞匯。4.文章脈絡(luò)清晰，立場(chǎng)鮮明。作者寫作行云流水，暢快自然。能夠?qū)⒆约旱挠^點(diǎn)亮明，并在結(jié)尾有總結(jié)性陳詞。總之，在考場(chǎng)上是一份不可多得的高分佳作。