Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(八)，并在其下而寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下而寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第ll處起)不計分。

Last Friday, we were having our class while our teacher Miss Li suddenly slipped and fall to the ground. All the students were concern about her. Helped by some students, I carried her on back to the clinic immediately. Her left leg was turned out to be broken and she had to stay in hospital for half a month. The following day, we paid a visit for her with flower and fruits. See her leg wrapped in bandages, all of us felt sorry for her, hoping she would recover soon. Unexpectedly, only five days late, Miss Li returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were deep moved, all rising to applaud her.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】while指一段時間，when 既指時間點，也可指一段時間，摔倒時瞬時的，是時間點。故將while改為when。

通讀全文可知，本文的時態(tài)是過去時，所用謂語動詞要用過去式。故將fall改為fell。

句意：所有的學(xué)都生被她關(guān)心。本句是被動語態(tài)，be動詞+動詞過去式表示被動。故將concern改為concerned。

根據(jù)句子可知本句中back是特指我的back，所以用my表示我的，或者用the特指我的。故添加my/the。

本句不是被動語態(tài)，句子中有兩個謂語動詞，去掉turned句子意思不完整。故去掉was。

pay a visit to是固定搭配，意為參觀，訪問。故將for改為to。

Some修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。故將flower改為flowers。

動詞位于句首要變成動名詞形式。故將see改為seeing。

Late是指晚的，later指稍晚一些，later一般和時間搭配。故將late改為later。

深是用來形容moved的，moved是動詞，副詞形容動詞。故將deep改為deeply。