Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦70周年國(guó)慶英文演講比賽，將邀請(qǐng)英文外教Peter擔(dān)任評(píng)委，請(qǐng)你寫封 邀請(qǐng)函，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 活動(dòng)主題“我愛中國(guó)”

2. 活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)

3. 比賽議程

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不包含在字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter，

I sincerely invite you to participate in the“National Day”English speaking competition in which you will serve as a judge．

Our activity are to be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30. The theme of the English speaking competition is “I love China”. When each speaker ends，each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills as well as give a mark comprehensively. According to the scores，the competition has one first prize，two second prizes，three third prizes，and ten outstanding awards．At the end of the competition，all the judges will go on stage to give awards to the winners and take photos．

Looking forward to your coming！

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，寫一封邀請(qǐng)函。

第一步：

審題: 邀請(qǐng)函

人稱：第二、三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)： 總分法，分三部分，第一部分寫信目的，第二部分說明比賽具體安排，第三部分期待Peter的到來。

要點(diǎn)：

1.寫信目的：邀請(qǐng)Peter當(dāng)英文演講比賽的評(píng)委

2．比賽的具體安排

①活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：9月30 日下午3點(diǎn)在學(xué)術(shù)報(bào)告廳舉行

②活動(dòng)主題是“我愛中國(guó)”

③ 比賽議程：每個(gè)演講后評(píng)委要發(fā)表評(píng)論，并給分；根據(jù)評(píng)委給分，比賽結(jié)束時(shí)進(jìn)行頒獎(jiǎng)

3．期待Peter的到來

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語 ）

invite sb. to； participate in；speaking competition；serve as ；theme；comment on；content ；skills；give a mark ；comprehensively；according to ； prize；outstanding； give award；winner；take photos

第三步：連詞成句

(1)I invite you to participate in the “National Day” English speaking competition.

(2)You will serve as a judge in the competition.

(3)Our activity will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

(4)The theme of the English speaking competition is “I love China”.

(5)Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills.

(6) Each judge will give a mark.

(6)The competition has one first prize，two second prizes，three third prizes，and ten outstanding awards．

(7)All the judges will go on stage to give awards to the winners and take photos．

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

用定語從句連接下面連個(gè)句子

(1)I invite you to participate in the “National Day” English speaking competition.

(2)You will serve as a judge in the competition.

→I invite you to participate in the “National Day” English speaking competition in which

you will serve as a judge

用多種方式表達(dá)“…將要舉行”

(3)Our activity will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

→Our activity are to be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

→Our activity is scheduled to be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

→According to the schedule, our activity will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

用并列句連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(5)Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills.

(6) Each judge will give a mark.

→ Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills as well as give a mark.

→ Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills and give a mark as well.

→ Each judge will not only comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills but also give a mark.

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次 ，增加文章的可讀性。