Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

(ECNS) -- A woman in Changsha, Hunan province, has caught her fifth-grade son spending 500 yuan (about 80 US dollars) for an online service that will do his winter-holiday homework for him.

The mother said she was disappointed in her son, and shocked that the service was so successful. Numerous ads for businesses that do homework for students could be found online. One shop owner said they could also guarantee that the handwriting style would match each client.

Ghostwriting three exercise books for a fifth-grade student costs about 120 yuan, she added. "But the exact charge will depend on factors such as the complexity of the assignment."

The owner also reminded her customers to buy the service in advance, saying "the fees will increase if customers buy the service at the end of the holiday."

Winter holiday for students starts around the middle of January and lasts about a month.

"We parents definitely won't allow children to buy the service," said Kong.

寫作內(nèi)容

1 請你以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2請你以約120詞談談人們對此現(xiàn)象的不同看法，內(nèi)容包括：

1) 人們的不同看法；

2) 你的看法；

3）如何制止這種現(xiàn)象。

【寫作要求】

1、作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

【評分標準】

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the popularity of the internet, a most worrying phenomenon has arisen. Some parents find that their children use pocket money to employ someone else to help finish their holiday homework on line.

Some people think homework is assigned to help students review what they have learned. Ghostwriting is kind of cheating, and that also shows some students lack the willpower for independent study. But others hold a different view, who think it's a reflection of students suffering from too much holiday homework. Children’s academic stress should be reduced. But they all agree to forbid ghostwriting online.

In my opinion, the service should be forbidden, and that service providers should be punished. At the same time teachers and parents should pay more attention to the development of children’s sense of independence and the teachers shouldn’t give children too much homework to do. But at the same time parents should be responsible for their children’s behavior when at home.

【解析】

本文是一篇議論文。成文時：1.篇章布局：根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可以分為三段。開頭段用大約30個字來概括故事內(nèi)容，表明自己的觀點，盡量使用涵蓋信息量大的長句；在第二段用事例或者引言來證明論點；最后提出自己要如何去做。2.時態(tài)：概括故事內(nèi)容或者講述自己的經(jīng)歷時使用一般過去時，發(fā)表觀點看法時使用一般現(xiàn)在時。3.恰當使用連接詞或者插入語以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，層次分明。4.盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式，以提高文章的檔次。