【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Failure comes to us now and then.I suffered painful failure in the exam hold the other day,and it helped me find a new self.Before the exam,I had promised my parents that I will get the best marks in all my subjects.However,I took everything for granted,ignoring my teachers’ advice or paying little attention to my homework.Therefore,I failed two of my favorite subjects,math and physics,what surprised everyone include myself.Looking at back,I realized that it was our overconfidence that led to the failure.Only if we are modest and work hard will we are able to have the chance to achieve our goal.

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【解析】第一處：考察冠詞。句意：我在前天的考試中遭受了一次痛苦的失敗。這里沒有特指是哪個“failure”，所以應(yīng)加上不定冠詞a.

第二處：考察非謂語動詞。held the other day為過去分詞做后置定語，修飾the exam，表示“前天舉行的考試”。因為the exam和hold之間為動賓關(guān)系，所以用hold的過去分詞形式做后置定語。故將hold改為held.

第三處：考察時態(tài)。根據(jù)前文I had promised my parents 可知時態(tài)為一般過去時，故將will改為would.

第四處：考察連詞。句意：我認為所有事情都是理所當然的，忽視了老師的建議，也沒有在意家庭作業(yè)。分析可知ignoring my teachers’ advice和paying little attention to my homework表示作者做的兩件事，為并列關(guān)系。句子為肯定句，故將or改為and.

第五處：考察非限制性定語從句。分析可知which surprised everyone including myself為非限制性定語從句，故將what改為which.

第六處：考察非謂語動詞。including sth.=sth. included，表示“包括某物”，通常在句子中充當非謂語做狀語。結(jié)合語境，“包括我自己”應(yīng)表達為“including myself”，故將include改為including。

第七處：考察介詞。句意：再回首，我才意識到正是我的過度自信導(dǎo)致了失敗。look at表示“看著某物”，look back表示“往后看，回首”。根據(jù)語境可知要將at去掉。

第八處：考察代詞。根據(jù)語境可知作者要表達的是“是我的過度自信導(dǎo)致了失敗”，故將our改為my。

第九處：考察動詞。Only if we are modest and work hard will we be able to have the chance to achieve our goals為部分倒裝句。句中情態(tài)動詞will提到主語we之前，謂語動詞應(yīng)采用動詞原形的形式。故將are還原為be。

第十處：考察單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：只有謙虛和努力學(xué)習(xí)，我們才有機會實現(xiàn)我們的目標。分析可知 “our goal”應(yīng)該不止一個，故將goal改為復(fù)數(shù)形式goals。

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