Question

【題目】讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (騎行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追趕）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1）. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2）. 應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3）. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好；
4）. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
Paragragh 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
Paragragh 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.

Answer 1

【答案】The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily， the magic spray saved Mac a third time。 Seeing the wolf back off，Paul quickly unlocked the door， and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time， shutting the door behind him heavily。 Bechy looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac's bicycle as if it were a kill。 Soon after， the animal ran off。
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked at what they saw and joined Paul. One of Mac's friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. Mac thanked Paul and Becky，“How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that I'm still alive.” As Mac got injured, the three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.(170 words)
【解析】前文提要：小學(xué)老師Mac Holland在一個晴朗溫暖的一月份的下午與朋友一起騎車去阿拉斯加。路上，朋友停下來修自行車，讓Mac先走他們隨后會趕上他的。Mac一個人騎行的時候，一只狼追上并試圖攻擊他。正拼命逃跑的時候，前面遇到了上坡。正在萬分緊急的關(guān)頭，Paul and Beeky駕車從后面趕上Mac，看見汽車，Mac立刻停在汽車的前面。
續(xù)寫線索：第一段所給首句：The car abruptly stopped in front of him。抓住關(guān)鍵信息the car stopped，對停車后Mac如何擺脫餓狼獲救加以描寫，力求寫出千鈞一發(fā)的緊迫感，同時還要合乎邏輯。
第二段所給首句A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.該句承上啟下。朋友到了之后發(fā)生了什么事，Mac又有何體會，在該段續(xù)寫中加以提煉升華。
續(xù)寫詞匯：Mac； friends；bicycle；pedaled；home；wolf；jumped；cars；climb；Paul
話題激活詞匯：
動作：jump；wave；kick；hit；beat；strike；hug； bite；shout；scream；rush；hurry
情緒：frightened；fiercely；madly；crazily；burst into tears；thankful；grateful；gratitude